I think things are working rather well. I would like to see more rocks and structure under the lighthouse and continue on to the right of the image, could help bring a bit more weight across the pages and make things a little more visually interesting to look at. Also could have dropped the clouds so the do not line up exactly with the light from the lighthouse. You could argue that this makes another strong L shape on the top of the page and I do not believe that is what you are going for.
I think things are working rather well. I would like to see more rocks and structure under the lighthouse and continue on to the right of the image, could help bring a bit more weight across the pages and make things a little more visually interesting to look at. Also could have dropped the clouds so the do not line up exactly with the light from the lighthouse. You could argue that this makes another strong L shape on the top of the page and I do not believe that is what you are going for.
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